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I like it without 'turned to slush' ... (less is more, kind of)

Andrew

On Thu, 21 Nov 2019 at 18:22, Patrick McManus <
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> Doug the turning to slush after such a bright sparkling start made me
> sad -cheers P
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> On 20/11/2019 22:07, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> > that light dust of snow   stuck
> >       to every twig   &  branch
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> > glows     in the lowering sun
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> > below     turned to slush
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> > it dulls the asphalt
> > lost in shadows
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> > Douglas Barbour
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> > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
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> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
> Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> > Listen. If (UofAPress):
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> > Swept snow, Li Po,
> > by dawn’s 40-watt moon
> > to the road that hies to office
> > away from home.
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> >              Lorine Niedecker
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Andrew
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