I like it without 'turned to slush' ... (less is more, kind of) Andrew On Thu, 21 Nov 2019 at 18:22, Patrick McManus < [log in to unmask]> wrote: > Doug the turning to slush after such a bright sparkling start made me > sad -cheers P > > On 20/11/2019 22:07, Douglas Barbour wrote: > > that light dust of snow stuck > > to every twig & branch > > > > glows in the lowering sun > > > > below turned to slush > > > > it dulls the asphalt > > lost in shadows > > > > > > Douglas Barbour > > [log in to unmask] > > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ > > > > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & > Continuations 2 (UofAPress). > > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). > > Listen. If (UofAPress): > > > > > > Swept snow, Li Po, > > by dawn’s 40-watt moon > > to the road that hies to office > > away from home. > > > > Lorine Niedecker > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > ######################################################################## > > > > To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: > > https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 > > ######################################################################## > > To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: > https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 > -- Andrew http://hispirits.blogspot.com/ Books available through Walleah Press http://walleahpress.com.au ######################################################################## To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1