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Doug,

Gradually discovered the acrostic after noting the unusual 4/5/1/4 stanzaic pattern for a sonnet. A very strong "turn" from the end of the 10th line to the beginning of the 11th.

Barry

On Wed, 20 Feb 2019 10:50:32 -0700, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

>meet the parents
>each time the same
>and different
>tell that to the kids
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>body knows what body feels
>loss across the years
>ordinary people
>or not      all learn
>dreams will falter
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>& drift     memory
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>batters against stories
>organizing what realities
>no one can now recall
>each time we tell them again
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>Douglas Barbour
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>https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
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>Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
>Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>Listen. If (UofAPress):
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>It was cold, in a way that Shadow was starting to become familiar with: colder inside the building than out. He wondered how they did that, if it was a British building secret.
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