Hi Sheila, Something to continue meditating on. I particularly liked the idea (or it's how it came to me) of making in this, and how some things escape that idea, or hold it out/are held out as continual possibility, just beyond. I liked skin skin and wondered about variations, such as skin's skin. Best,Jill ___________________________________________Jill Jones ----- Original Message ----- From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" To: Cc: Sent:Tue, 18 Dec 2018 19:56:37 -0700 Subject:Snap: Whiteboard You could meditate and have it not be true what you maybe inadvertently have made. Or you could remain unconscious and allow what happens to skin skin be termed reality. Equally, you could punctuate your observations using comma after comma, string them forward until they held your attention alongside that of others, the dimensions of an uninvented sky. Sheila Murphy ######################################################################## To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 ######################################################################## To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1