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Fabulous, Jill. Entrances so tricky, especially onto page.

Bill

On Thu, 6 Sep 2018 at 1:09 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

> Ouch, Jill.  Catches that stumble in every line, neatly.
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> Doug
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> > On Sep 5, 2018, at 8:19 AM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> >       Dizzy at night on the footpath, losing it, vertigo
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> >       Mirrors in the lift, something to avoid
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> >       The book I can never finish still on the bedside table
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> >       The entrance hard to enter
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> >       Perpendiculars aren’t easy
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> >       There’s too much space on the page
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> >       Opened into spreading as a form of walking
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> >       The letter I never wrote
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> > ________________________
> > Jill Jones
> > www.jilljones.com.au
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> > Latest book: Brink, Five Islands Press
> > http://fiveislandspress.com/catalogue/brink-jill-jones
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