Fabulous, Jill. Entrances so tricky, especially onto page. Bill On Thu, 6 Sep 2018 at 1:09 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Ouch, Jill. Catches that stumble in every line, neatly. > > Doug > > > On Sep 5, 2018, at 8:19 AM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > > > > > > > Dizzy at night on the footpath, losing it, vertigo > > > > Mirrors in the lift, something to avoid > > > > The book I can never finish still on the bedside table > > > > The entrance hard to enter > > > > > > > > Perpendiculars aren’t easy > > > > There’s too much space on the page > > > > Opened into spreading as a form of walking > > > > > > > > The letter I never wrote > > > > > > ________________________ > > Jill Jones > > www.jilljones.com.au > > > > Latest book: Brink, Five Islands Press > > http://fiveislandspress.com/catalogue/brink-jill-jones > > > > > > > > ######################################################################## > > > > To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: > > https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 > > Douglas Barbour > [log in to unmask] > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ > > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations > 2 (UofAPress). > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). > Listen. If (UofAPress): > > > Shakespeare > Drag yr mouldy old bones > Up these stairs & tell me > What you died of, > I think > I’ve got it > Too. > > Sharon Thesen > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > ######################################################################## > > To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: > https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 > ######################################################################## To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1