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Bill, Your choice of the word "lawless" struck me, especially having read psychological analyses of dream patterning. It did help me to understand the first line upon rereading. Are those "truths" vertical? Barry On Wed, 5 Sep 2018 17:33:06 +1000, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >Thanks, Patrick. Actually the last linen was the first line that came to me. The rest came slowly. > >Bill > >> On 5 Sep 2018, at 5:20 pm, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >> >> thanks Bill no nightmares I trust!!!! could be a lot of alternative last lines P >> >> >> On 04/09/2018 23:40, Bill Wootton wrote: >>> Horizontal lies, tucked-in truths >>> >>> play in your head >>> >>> as you disappear >>> >>> into the lawless cinema of dreams >>> >>> >>> bw >>> >>> ######################################################################## >>> >>> To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: >>> https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 >> >> >> ######################################################################## >> >> To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: >> https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 > >######################################################################## > >To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: >https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1 ######################################################################## To unsubscribe from the POETRYETC list, click the following link: https://www.jiscmail.ac.uk/cgi-bin/webadmin?SUBED1=POETRYETC&A=1