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Well IME, as someone recovering from a "schizophrenia" diagnosis, it can be.

Luke

On 12 May 2018 at 21:35, Mark Weiss <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

> All written language is a foreign language.
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Luke
> Sent: May 12, 2018 4:11 PM
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: on verbs in poetry
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> > The language of authenticity is  a learned behavior.
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> And Ashbery's "language"?
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> Luke
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> On 12 May 2018 at 20:10, Mark Weiss <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> The language of authenticity is  a learned behavior.
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: David Bircumshaw
>> Sent: May 12, 2018 2:32 PM
>> To: [log in to unmask]
>> Subject: Re: on verbs in poetry
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>> Yes.Tristan. But for instance Peter Porter wrote poems about losing his
>> wife. Surely those were equally authentic.
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>> On 12 May 2018 at 18:56, Tristan Moss <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>> She lost an adult son. Read the poem by Riley Luke. Here’s a link to it.
>>> https://www.lrb.co.uk/v34/n03/denise-riley/a-part-song
>>>
>>> She just has a great way with words and the ability to choose just the
>>> right one. Of course, this adds to the authenticity of the voice.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On 12 May 2018, at 18:31, Luke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>> Not suggesting that you haven't! Just suggesting that one can't decide
>>> from your description, anymore than you can from knowing the Riley's (or at
>>> least, the author) lost a baby.
>>>
>>> Luke
>>>
>>> On 12 May 2018 at 18:29, Luke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>>> Surely it's impossible to say without reading it
>>>>
>>>> > Tom Paulin, an otherwise fan, regarded it as 'adolescent'.
>>>>
>>>> Luke
>>>>
>>>> On 12 May 2018 at 09:02, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>>>> This interesting Tim, and knotty, but it has the feel of real
>>>>> discussion. One might almost say authentic :)
>>>>>
>>>>> DH Lawrence could well be called authentic. Yet he was also rhetorical
>>>>> and pretentious, all those dark gods that had no place wandering the
>>>>> streets of an imagination made a bus ride from Nottingham.
>>>>>
>>>>> Is Peter Reading's 'C' authentic? A hundred pieces of prose behaving
>>>>> like poems each a hundred words long written in a style au naturel but as
>>>>> artificial and calculated as a wedding song by Spenser. A fake fiction
>>>>> about cancer by a man who once had it and another time would die from it.
>>>>> Tom Paulin, an otherwise fan, regarded it as 'adolescent'.
>>>>>
>>>>> Are the best-selling Birthday Letters authentic?? Is Maya Angelou
>>>>> ditto?
>>>>>
>>>>> Best
>>>>>
>>>>> Dave
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>>
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>>>>>
>>>>> On 11 May 2018 at 11:44, Tim Allen <0000002899e7d020-dmarc-reques
>>>>> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Yes exactly Luke, the 'how' is still missing, at least in the sense
>>>>>> of describing a 'how' that was special to Riley. I used the word
>>>>>> 'authentic' because of its innate problems - it is one of the most
>>>>>> difficult terms to use when applied to the arts, but nevertheless I think
>>>>>> my use of it in the context of Riley is 'authentic'.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Perceptions of and identifying authenticity in music is an even more
>>>>>> contentious - the process that leads from authentic feeling and expression
>>>>>> first to model/form then to simulacrum and finally to soulless golem (e.g.
>>>>>> x factor or whatever) is almost impossible to untangle.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Cheers
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Tim
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 11 May 2018, at 02:03, Luke wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>> I'm still missing a *how*. No-one is innately authentic, so how does
>>>>>> one go about it? Incidentally. I was recently listening to Kurt Cobain, of
>>>>>> Nirvana, ha, and it struck me so, also. So not limited to poetry, anyway!
>>>>>>
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