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Hi Sheila, Thanks for that. I'm glad a sense of the language and movement of it comes across even if the references may be obscure. I sometimes think twice about using specific references in poems - things that will date or are embedded in the local and may not travel beyond that - but I also like to acknowledge that I live and write in a time and place and see what might happen. Best, Jill ________________________ Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au Latest book: Brink, Five Islands Press http://fiveislandspress.com/catalogue/brink-jill-jones ----- Original Message ----- From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" To: Cc: Sent:Wed, 15 Nov 2017 09:25:45 -0700 Subject:Re: Snap: Same Love Goes Harder Jill, The collage effects were interesting, and the embedded song, as well. The cause per se is powerful. Some language obstacles for me, based upon unfamiliarity with the resonances of particular words, titles, etc. That said, I absorb the harmonic functioning of how your work can go. You touch upon a single instant and much more follows in feeling and understanding. Always worth it for me, believe me! thanks, Sheila