Doug the broken up form /subject for me fits well cheers P On 14/06/2017 19:24, Douglas Barbour wrote: > pain is so personal > unless it’s so public > it’s something more than pain > > all those bodies in > or beyond it > we feel for & at > that distance do not _feel_ > > & our own a cut a punch > or something more > & longer lasting > > that _hurts_ that > haunts our nights > physical presence > in the body > > & so in the mind > until it’s over > > gone & only > remembered as like > > until the next time > when it’s new & sore > all over again > > > Douglas Barbour > [log in to unmask] > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ > > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress). > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). > Listen. If (UofAPress): > > > I go down to the Twilight Arcade > and watch the Martian invaders, > already appalled by our language, > pointing at what they want. > > Bill Manhire