Thanks Andrew & Bill
Good point, but I guess it’s the lying part of lyric I want to emphasize, Bill.
Doug
> On May 17, 2017, at 6:37 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Like it, Doug. But do you need both 'lying low' and 'in hiding'?
>
> Bill
>
> On Thu, 18 May 2017 at 10:09 AM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Your poem is right, Doug - and so well said. Thanks.
>>
>> Andrew
>>
>> On 18 May 2017 at 01:44, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>>> the lyric lying low
>>> in hiding waits
>>> a sneak to seek
>>> por favour that moment
>>> emotional guards are down
>>> & words mean ever more
>>> than anyone can say
>>>
>>>
>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>
>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>
>>> and as you read
>>> the sea is turning its dark pages
>>> turning
>>> its dark pages.
>>>
>>> Denise Levertov
>>>
>>
>>
>>
>> --
>> Andrew
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>>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Listen. If (UofAPress):
and as you read
the sea is turning its dark pages
turning
its dark pages.
Denise Levertov
