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I rather like both together -nice expansion of lying low cheers P On 18/05/2017 16:00, Douglas Barbour wrote: > Thanks Andrew & Bill > > Good point, but I guess it’s the lying part of lyric I want to emphasize, Bill. > > Doug >> On May 17, 2017, at 6:37 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >> >> Like it, Doug. But do you need both 'lying low' and 'in hiding'? >> >> Bill >> >> On Thu, 18 May 2017 at 10:09 AM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >> >>> Your poem is right, Doug - and so well said. Thanks. >>> >>> Andrew >>> >>> On 18 May 2017 at 01:44, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >>> >>>> the lyric lying low >>>> in hiding waits >>>> a sneak to seek >>>> por favour that moment >>>> emotional guards are down >>>> & words mean ever more >>>> than anyone can say >>>> >>>> >>>> Douglas Barbour >>>> [log in to unmask] >>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ >>>> >>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations >>>> 2 (UofAPress). >>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). >>>> Listen. If (UofAPress): >>>> >>>> and as you read >>>> the sea is turning its dark pages >>>> turning >>>> its dark pages. >>>> >>>> Denise Levertov >>>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> Andrew >>> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/ >>> Books available through Walleah Press >>> http://walleahpress.com.au >>> > Douglas Barbour > [log in to unmask] > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ > > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress). > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). > Listen. If (UofAPress): > > and as you read > the sea is turning its dark pages > turning > its dark pages. > > Denise Levertov