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Like 'skein' of cloud particularly, Doug. Echo Pat on spacing but I know you like doing it. Bill On Thu., 15 Dec. 2016 at 9:23 pm, Patrick McManus < [log in to unmask]> wrote: > Douglas not sure about the space between' moon and a'does it need an > > and or something closer together with or '-' > > > > or not cheers P who knows I ramble and off to shop on trusty bike many > > panniered- a trusty mechanical donkey > > > > > > On 14/12/2016 18:49, Douglas Barbour wrote: > > > full moon a balloon > > > hovers in a skein of cloud > > > almost Japanese > > > > > > > > > Douglas Barbour > > > [log in to unmask] > > > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ > > > > > > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & > Continuations 2 (UofAPress). > > > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press). > > > > > > Venerable Optimist > > > > > > He saw the dark as a ragged garment > > > spread out to air. > > > Through its rents and moth-holes > > > the silver light came pouring. > > > > > > Denise Levertov > >