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cheers Bill take point but think it it sort of sounds okay P(up late!!) On 07/09/2016 13:49, Bill Wootton wrote: > Bad day, PatMac. Do you need 'rather' in line 3? > > Bill > > On Tuesday, 6 September 2016, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> > wrote: > >> *DEBRIEFING* >> >> at the >> >> board meeting >> >> he was rather >> >> criticised for >> >> bad planning >> >> management >> >> and execution >> >> of the project >> >> when with even >> >> solid angel >> >> and miracle >> >> back up >> >> he got himself >> >> totally >> >> incompetently >> >> nailed to a cross >> >> and then had >> >> the temerity >> >> to ask why >> >> his father had >> >> forsaken him! >> >> /pmcmanus/ >> >> /s006/ >> >> >> // >> >> // >>