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The poem is almost a subtle allusion to gay sex. A schoolboy discussing handwriting and lusting after the other boys in secret:
one of the above would have known
what I was up to.


 I'm reminded of one of Eduardo Corral's poems about a violin. . . 


So many allusions: riding bareback, stirrups, bifurcated rib, forearm sprawl, the longer he went at it, pressed so hard, K's tight, neat "script"  Even Peter Sellars  (spelled  differently, I know), the openly gay theater director. . .


A school boy watching the other students's muscles flex as they practice handwriting and imagining more.




millicent


On Aug 16, 2016, at 14:34, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

> L pressed so hard on his bifurcated nib
> that it splayed, sending out a shadow script
> 
> B's bright text stood up vertically
> looping over lines playfully
> 
> O's letters raced; ps and qs lost their
> bulbousness the longer he went at it
> 
> Each of these styles I endeavoured
> to replicate for as long as I admired the writer
> 
> A's left-handed lurch to the right
> required a forearm sprawl
> 
> K's tight, neat script anticipated
> his composed later life as a dentist
> 
> G's letters leapt left and right randomly
> Hard to emulate but I gave it a shot
> 
> None of the above would have known
> what I was up to.
> 
> In between adoptions, my own script
> tentatived on lined pages until
> 
> I latched on to a new cursive hero
> to marshal my letters.
> 
> Peter Sellers could be any man
> but drew a blank at himself
> 
> No bareback writer, my ideas
> trotted out but needed stirrups.
> 
> bw