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I see. The Ninja were not around till a long time after Elidius' latest
possible date of death. So...

L

On 13 August 2015 at 12:10, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:

> Thanks Ah Lawrence but there was another scribe (perhaps bribed a great
> bribe!)there who wrote that Elidius the famed Ninja monk (far travelled)
> smote them all a great smoting!!
> P elderly man
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 13 August 2015 11:36
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: draft, for Patrick
>
> from *ELIDIUS ON ENNOR*
>
> *I tell you this in truth*
>
>
>
> I tell you this in truth, taken
>
> from good sources, all reliable,
>
> who often helped in my difficulties:
>
> their spoken words were written out
>
> by trustworthy scribes I've heard of.
>
> I am sure it should be accurate.
>
>
>
> One day, Elidius loses the great calm,
>
> kept long, if superficially,
>
> and hits an elderly fisherman �
>
> let's call him Peter for a joke
>
> (many say his name was Patrick
>
> and there are few snakes on those rocks)
>
> calling him bad unpleasant names,
>
> threatening him with promises of pain.
>
>
>
> The attacked man responds in kind
>
> but lacks forceful aggressive rage.
>
>
>
> All frightens the elderly man quite much
>
> and others join the fight, hoping
>
> to bring it to a smiling pause.
>
>
>
> Elid uses those feet hardened
>
> from walking over exposed rock
>
> without hesitation or rest;
>
> he is tough � but without great strength,
>
> so he fights ineffectually.
>
> He hurts one. They retaliate
>
> and he is quickly overwhelmed.
>
> Then, as he starts to apologise,
>
> they ask him to speak words properly
>
> and beat him more, as a foreigner.
>
> He leads. He begins to scream. He cries.
>
> He curses everyone and flees.
>
> They throw stones after him. He hides.
>
>
>
> There is, regrettably, no more.
>
> Not in the accounts. Not now. Perhaps
>
> there never was anything extra.
>