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Absolutely like it. And, yes, the Lee turn at the end was cherry on top! Can I blog it, Max? With attribution, of course. On 14 May 2015 at 08:54, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Liked the mortal/immortal distinction, Max and, like Doug, the Lee turn. > Your outsider/observer status the right touch I think. > > Bill > > > On 14 May 2015, at 1:45 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > >> > >> Here beneath a sculpted stone, her name, > -- Andrew http://hispirits.blogspot.com/ 'Undercover of Lightness' http://walleahpress.com.au/recent-publications.html 'Shikibu Shuffle' http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com.au/2012/03/new-from-aboveground-press-shikibu.html