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Agree with Sheila. And the way it moves to that ending, in the air. J ________________________Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au ----- Original Message ----- From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" To: Cc: Sent:Wed, 5 Nov 2014 10:45:54 -0700 Subject:Re: breakdown I hear this vividly, Lawrence. It is highly charged. The visual enters the auditory in a way that resonates. On Wed, Nov 5, 2014 at 3:53 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote: > prewar material; cut to > > camera lens, curling at the edges, > > one tower above many antennae, > > weapon barrels > > > > a shallow rise out of straight, slow climbing curves > > returning to straight > > a raised eye brow > > back of my hand > > > > Tall poles set in heath. > > A monkey up a pole gesticulating > > with one upstretched arm. > > It is dressed in a rhinestone suit. > > Sunset in one hour and a half. > > Sleet falling in shining air. >