Patrick, you are great, and I appreciate this response :) On Tue, Oct 28, 2014 at 12:04 AM, Patrick McManus < [log in to unmask]> wrote: > Hi Sheila I enjoyed the sort of flickering feel to it -pared down > -feeling a bit spindly myself today!:-) > > -----Original Message----- > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On > Behalf Of Sheila Murphy > Sent: 27 October 2014 17:59 > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: pre-snap > > A spindly and > transparent winter > parts from > > lake > the color snow, > foreground > > of sticks > alongside > evening's pale > > sky parted > from shared > place. > > > Sheila E. Murphy >