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yeah, a neat quick take, Bill, but I second Max’s suggestion…

Doug
On Feb 4, 2014, at 1:28 PM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:

> On 05/02/2014, at 7:15 AM, Bill Wootton wrote:
> 
>> Afterspark report
>> 
>> Fire in Hurstbridge 
>> she said blankly
>> staring
>> at her iphone screen 
>> reached for in bed
>> post conjoinment 
>> 
>> oh it's ok
>> it's been contained
> neat compact telling of one of those fire-season moments in Victoria and elsewhere…
> but:
> 
> Is 'conjoinment' a word?
> A Product of Evolution asked 2 years ago
> Coming from the word 'conjoined'.
> 
> 
> Ms. Worth answered 2 years ago
> 
> I don't think it's a very good word -- even if the reader would know what you mean. 
> 
> If you need a noun form from the word "conjoined," maybe it would be better to use the gerund "conjoining." 
> 
> Is it a sly hint in the direction of 'coition'?
> post-cooital?

Douglas Barbour
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