bravely? not really It looks as though the system chewed the layout i had spaces and stuff oh well L On 29 January 2014 13:08, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>wrote: > L cheers bravely atop a ferry boat > P > > -----Original Message----- > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On > Behalf Of Lawrence Upton > Sent: 29 January 2014 10:49 > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: snap > > atop a ferry boat, eyes closing,each wave... each sound... each > moment...I am overwhelmed > lean, my head against metal,discerning rhythm overridingundertones of > boat's engine; and the sea > cannot be turned offby moving backand sitting up > eyes open > a sharp andthen harsh glintabove the mainland north of Sounionbecomes > a helicopter rising > coming at us > keeps going towards Corinth >