I like the swift visuals, & the colours, Lawrence. I suspect there may be some small edits, eventually, but this one moves... Doug On 2013-03-27, at 4:49 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > > a turn in a half-circle looking southward > > a curve of granite uplands; and, between, > > within a half-ellipse of stone and sight > > in which the broken peaks, older than Jehova, > > have precedence in shaping function, > > fields, many showing evidence of work > > / > > turn the other way, and the universe > > is shaped striped pottery -- light blue; > > dark blue with green; then green and brown > > / > > the rectangularity of hedge grids > > does not change the underlying circularity > > of this end of present Earth, finis terra > > (so much more impressive than English lands end > > suggesting a state of things which needs specialism: > > there's not just some water you can't ford or round > > / > > but the significance is read inland > > where all directions converge or double back > > as if in panic at an abattoir truck > > / > > this morning's a bronze age, flowering yellow, > > chunk greys glow with the sunlight they have sucked; > > green shimmering beneath white-and-blue > > in which the moon floats on bright Earth shadow > > tilted upon the flow of other gravity > > / > > a standing stone in the middle of its field goes on > > / > > study it > > rub your head and arse on it > > like a cow > > / > > this is an entire space to be > > while its warm > > a bare dry wall-stone pulsates > > with tiny spiders, each staggering onward, > > the road's wet with them, briefly; > > small birds hesitate and then flutter about, eating them bittily > > hesitant and not quite sure, full of urges > > / > > listen to the first few insects hum, the wind lifting > > your hair across your ears, your blood ascending > > and descending the pyramid of the brain > > / > > not stunned and sweaty as in August's greatest heats > > but still as before any opening out, > > the day-time yet too brief and chilly daisied > > > Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ Latest books: Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962 Recording Dates (Rubicon Press) Reserved books. Reserved land. Reserved flight. And still property is theft. Phyllis Webb