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	Nor am I a doggy person. I tend to be pro mammals that don't want to
eat me. Rats and mice included, unless they're in my house.

	But the boy and his dog stuff isn't for me -- I mean the Harlan
Ellison story

	But there was something going on there.

	In part it may be that the dog isnt doing it very well. He doesn't
have a pack to learn from -- and I was struck by the quote about wild
dogs not barking. I was going to say Huskies bark; they're wild. But
of course they're not wild. They've been duped into working for us.

	Thanks for the comment. It's not, as I said, an immortal poem; an
entertainment... and it has done a bit of entertaining!

	L

----- Original Message -----
From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" 
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Sent:Mon, 8 Oct 2012 07:37:27 +1100
Subject:Re: The words of dog

 These dog words spoke to me, Laurence and I'm not even a doggy
person. Dogs and salt water waves. 
 Something definitely going on there. The warning stuff seems to
capture it.

 On Wed, Oct 3rd, 2012 at 11:33 PM, Lawrence Upton  wrote:

 > 
 > 
 > A fox terrier is barking at the sea. 
 > 
 > To dogs, his words might have exact meaning 
 > 
 > depending on their breed and dialect. 
 > 
 > It is for them that the dog barks; always; 
 > 
 > even in his most intimate dealings 
 > 
 > with Humans, he vocalises for the large pack 
 > 
 > he fantasises -- from our point of view -- 
 > 
 > the pack which shall be when the world's made right. 
 > 
 > Some canine thought will not translate that well 
 > 
 > and seems to us flaccid, like a beach ball 
 > 
 > that has been punctured by sharp teeth; or dull, 
 > 
 > like something which one hopes will move, but won't. 
 > 
 > Nevertheless, I'll try to give the gist. 
 > 
 > He sings: Oh big area of drab water, 
 > 
 > I mistrust you. Why do you keep moving? 
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 > I'm warning you! Be still and let me bite. 
 > 
 > Ocean, if that's what you are â I doubt it â 
 > 
 > don't be cowardly. Be still. I may attack. 
 > 
 > Look at the mess you have made. Pathetic. 
 > 
 > Is that the best you can do? 
 > 
 > Disorder? 
 > 
 > I've seen more chaos in my feeding bowl. 
 > 
 > Just because there's a lot of you, you know... 
 > 
 > I'm still warning you! I shall break contact. 
 > 
 > I shall come back, when I am free, and piss 
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 > and I shall for a night and for a day 
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 > until you are polluted and ashamed 
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 > I will chew you into such little ponds 
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 > that you will not be coordinated 
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 > and my friends will come and drink all of you 
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 > I'm warning you. I don't like your size here 
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 > Go away now and come back much smaller. 
 > 
 > I'm warning you. I'm warning you. Stop it. 
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