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Jill thanks enjoyed the short sparse feeling-sort of flicking to the next line P - -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Jill Jones Sent: 15 August 2012 15:41 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: snap - today's rewrite Blue light surface covers memory of sound with abundant shadow no box nor drum entirely contains the wandering breath a song-dreamed open breathes difficulty blooms form