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On Wed, May 23, 2012 17:25, Jill Jones wrote:
> terrific last line
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> On 23/05/2012, at 9:25 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
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>> He is coming in behind her. Could be,
>> she is leading him; or was sent forward. Certainly, she is doing the
>> stuff. Smiling. He, however, is not happy at all.
>> The head is tilted with harsh  aggression,
>> pulled back and up, pointing the jaws, a dog fully considering attack: he
>> glares and he assesses, overtones mixing.
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>> If there is a ground note, it is large fear
>> of losing what he does not own but rules, the landowner assessing by
>> sight the strength of his rebellious peasantry, wondering how long it
>> will take the constabulary to arrive from town. He senses trouble for his
>> place in the form of one he knows with some half-remembered
>> apprehension. What the hell are you doing here? ask eyes
>> obsessed by other people and themselves. He is scared of everything that
>> is not him.
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>> -----
>> Lawrence Upton
>> Visiting Fellow, Music Dept,
>> Goldsmiths, University of London
>> New Cross, London SE14 6NW
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Lawrence Upton
Visiting Fellow, Music Dept,
Goldsmiths, University of London
New Cross, London SE14 6NW
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