Dear John,
 
Crib or not, my view is that this was a straightforward statement of pity for the death, and the manner of death, of those whose fear was so great that it became too obvious, the key words being 'which being known', since almost every soldier repeatedly experiences fear in battle but masters it to some extent.
 
This is in contrast to other Epitaphs in which he represents the dead as specifically rejecting pity, such as 'Ex Clerk' and 'The Refined Man'.
 
I do not think that any personal guilt that he might have felt for the death of his son played any part in the brief lines, rather that the pity he felt extended to the parents of the 'coward', since they could not feel, as Kipling did, that " - lots of people are in our position and it's something to have bred a man" [letter 12 Nov 1915 to Col LC Dunsterville (Stalky). See Letters, Vol 4, Thomas Pinney, Macmillan, 1999]
 
Yours,
 
Roger
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Has anyone any thoughts which might be helpful to Mr Putkowski ?
 
Good wishes yo all, John R
 
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Dear John Radcliffe,

Very many thanks for your speedy response to my enquiry. Hibberd and Onions ('The Winter Of the World') state Kipling started writing 'Epitaphs of the War' in April 1918, which he declared to be 'naked cribs of the Greek Anthology'. Knowing little about Kipling, I'm curious about whether "The Coward" was a more-or-less straightforward crib or was perhaps ignited by more immediate political discourse about British military executions. Though not myself seduced by the introspective aspect of "The Coward", a literary chum with whom I once discussed the verse dallied with the intriguing proposition that Kipling (burdened with guilt about the death of his son) may even have identified himself with the condemned man.

Best Wishes,

Julian


Julian Putkowski

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Dear Mr Putkowski
 
"The Coward" is one of Kipling's "Epitaphs of the War", which was collected in "The Years Between" in 1919.  You will find the full set on our web-site at www.kipling.org.uk.  These had previously appeared in various periodicals, and I do not have the details of these to hand at the moment.
 
I am copying this note to colleagues who may be able to help you further.
 
All good wishes,
 
John Radcliffe    
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Dear John Radcliffe,

I am presently engaged in a research project about the contrasting reactions to the execution of British soldiers during the First World War. Kipling's addressed the subject in his poem, "The Coward" but I have been unable to find out exactly when and where he may have composed the verse. I would be most grateful if you or another authority on Kipling's work know when and how "The Coward" came to be written.


Yours sincerely,

Julian Putkowski