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Thank you. Actually, this is one of a set I am co-writing with a friend who is not, per se, a poet. His name is Richard Kessling. So it's his too. [That's _so_ as in _therefore_ rather than _so_ as in clearing the throat before speaking which seems to be spreading virally] I didn't say that, about Richard, when I posted, not to gain any glory solo but to not say too many things at once that were not directly connected with the poem. I shall pass your comment to Richard. [Somewhere in the memory of this machine there may be an unfinished response to yours on the wf workshop - basically I was saying yes, it's very like PE. I think I trashed it with my thick fingers but if it suddenly appears I'll finish. Otherwise: yes] Lawrence On Wed, February 8, 2012 15:34, Douglas Barbour wrote: > Yeah, a snap, caught on the run: I like it. > > > Doug > On 2012-02-08, at 8:21 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote: > > >> A woman and a man, grey-haired, long-limbed, >> walking along the shoreline, away from the rising sun. They are in most >> ways almost identical. >> >> He's earnest; and she's looking straight ahead >> as they pass; but he swings above his head both hands, while saying "over >> the volcano". >> > > Douglas Barbour > [log in to unmask] > > http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ > http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ > > > Latest books: > Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) > http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 > Wednesdays' > http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10 > .html > > > What dull barbarians are not proud of > their dullness and barbarism? > > Thackeray > > > > > > > > > > > > > > ----- UNFRAMED PICTURES by Lawrence Upton 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4 wfuk.org.uk/blog ----