i liked both by that title, Lawrence, but was fascinated by the differences. Here the speaker so present; there standing back & taking in. As I read all these I want to hear them in your voice…. Doug On 2011-09-15, at 12:03 PM, Lawrence Upton wrote: > One stroke of light runs down a whole spine length, > repeating a pressure’s brightness over others, > overpoweringly; fire burns vision, > in, through, with excessive enthusiasm. > > Which is hokum. There is nothing personal. > There is no transaction between the sky and earth. > Such exchange is not now within our love. > We impose avarice upon the engine world. > > It’s much the same as yesterday with heat > while we are too excited frotting off, > expressing need, like dogs against chair legs. > > Give us some leadership! we growl! Give us > a hand and wank us off, Almighty God: > we feel so much better when it’s done. > > > > ----- > UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton > 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover > Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4 > wfuk.org.uk/blog > ---- > Lawrence Upton > Dept of Music > Goldsmiths, University of London > Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ Latest books: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 Wednesdays' http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html People say they have to express their emotions. I'm sick of that. Photography doesn't teach you to express your emotions; it teaches you how to see. Berenice Abbott