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Depends on what you mean by "works." Please define. Serving the tri-state area. Hal Halvard Johnson ================ [log in to unmask] http://sites.google.com/site/halvardjohnson/Home http://entropyandme.blogspot.com http://imageswithoutwords.blogspot.com http://www.hamiltonstone.org <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/> http://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/home <http://www.hamiltonstone.org/> Remains To Be Seen<https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tII1LvsGmJpmLby_dyie77p3D2u2sAwcJL3TuW5T-nY/edit?hl=en_US> *, Remains To Be Seen (Vol. II)<https://docs.google.com/document/d/198kwjOUuDuROG50BpMvKu_05auLcYh1Ce03rHqsSBNE/edit?hl=en_US> ,** *Sonnets from the Basque & Other Poems<https://docs.google.com/document/d/16pWoy7FBSWyCLWpz0hhI-i0BOYjSBeUiqfWBmJF3g64/edit?hl=en_US> *, *Mainly Black<https://docs.google.com/document/edit?id=1i_JGJ_FqQldEnUq7cwjV8giYykz_tsGbTkC2EkAP3IM&hl=en&pli=1#> , *Obras Públicas<https://sites.google.com/site/vidalocabooks/halvard-johnson-obras-publicas> ; **The Perfection of Mozart's Third Eye and Other Sonnets<http://www.scribd.com/doc/27039868/Halvard-Johnson-THE-PERFECTION-OF-MOZART-S-THIRD-EYE-Other-Sonnets> ; **Organ Harvest with Entrance of Clones<http://www.amazon.com/Harvest-Entrance-Clones-Halvard-Johnson/dp/0965404390/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1283182804&sr=8-1> ; **Tango Bouquet<https://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0ATDp6rzKkBkhZGZwand2cHdfOWc1Mnh3Zw&hl=en> ; **Theory of Harmony<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/fall04/theory1.pdf> ; **Rapsodie espagnole<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/rapsodi.pdf> ; **Guide to the Tokyo Subway<http://www.amazon.com/Guide-Tokyo-Subway-Other-Poems/dp/0971487316/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1283183153&sr=1-3> ; **The Sonnet Project<https://docs.google.com/viewer?url=http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/hsonnet.pdf> ; **G(e)nome <http://xpressed.wippiespace.com/fall03/genome.pdf>; **Winter Journey <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.winter.html>; **Eclipse<http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.eclipse.html> ; **The Dance of the Red Swan <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.dance.html>; * *Transparencies & Projections <http://capa.conncoll.edu/johnson.transp.html> * On Tue, Sep 6, 2011 at 1:58 PM, Bob Grumman <[log in to unmask]>wrote: > the luminescence of the ice skates > lying where poetry in English > made its first major ascent > > I'd greatly appreciate feedback as to whether or not > > 1. it works as a poem? > > 2. what it means as a critical statement about the history of poetry in > English is clear? > > 3. its meaning as a critical statement (if clear) makes sense? > > It is intended to be both poem, albeit a (very minor) poem-within-a- > larger-poem, and a critical statement. > > --Bob