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L Walla not L wallydrag nor L wallaroo nor L waldrapp playing his waldflute! P back to sorting the sty (pen) -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Lawrence Upton Sent: 02 September 2011 10:23 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Re: Landscape diptych nah i just write whaaaat on my favourite walls L On Fri, September 2, 2011 10:20, Patrick McManus wrote: > What no flame wars- poet warriors Unleashing naughty -bring back > Kent!words > at each other -bring back Kent! -the county of course! > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On > Behalf Of Lawrence Upton > Sent: 02 September 2011 10:11 > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: Re: Landscape diptych > > > Dear Patrick > > >> such a wonderful put down!!!cheers deboyed > > not intended as anything so strong, not really, tho I admit I might have > hesitated had we not been mildly rude to each other over the posts; just > wanted to make the point > > I am intrigued by the evocative power of a line or mark, well-placed, to > show what is not actually shown, the brain persuaded to see > > and analogues in writing > > same wall? the word wall > > from nowhere comes the memory of many years ago, thirty years ago, > reading the opening sequence of Bleak House in a seminar group and the > tutor asking quietly Where's the main verb? > >> >> >> 'interesting that the poems have been ironed out by forwarding those >> nice space bit all gone looks quite different in your original flattened >> my poems tend to be flattened I must explore layout technique more >> myself >> >> I was looking at the poems as a painter -diptych and was trying to >> relate them (in my umble opinion) better For me the first poem worked >> better than the second -who know's why????? > L analysis analysis?? >> Bloody >> academics:-) >> > >> in what way? By reading the bloody thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! > > you'll be kicking stones and declaiming in a Brummie accent next > >> Have good weekend where are you now Goldsmith's left behind?? >> > > Goldsmiths > > > In my end is my beginning > > > Been in Cambridgeshire, was hoping to do a bit of Oxfordshire soon but > have been unable to make the arts council grunt > > Bristol presently, briefly -- working and exhibiting; and curating > cobbing again > > but Goldsmiths, Goldsmiths, for now anyway > > i've been doing stuff here, this way and that, for a decade > > L > > > > > >> Ps Am reading a fascinating book 'We The Drowned' >> Carsten Jensen some bits >> remind me of your 'Cornish' poems > > I'll take that as a compliment then > > > piptoodle > > L > ----- > UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton > 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover > Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4 > wfuk.org.uk/blog ---- > Lawrence Upton > Dept of Music > Goldsmiths, University of London > > ----- UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4 wfuk.org.uk/blog ---- Lawrence Upton Dept of Music Goldsmiths, University of London