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I especially liked 'unstopping cars' in the first part, Lawrence, hinged on adjective & verb. then the expression of 'the fallacy of land,' how the poem begins to float toward that fine final couplet... Doug On 2011-08-05, at 9:21 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote: > at this point, for now, Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ Latest books: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 Wednesdays' http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html It is natural to speak of your own weaknesses so winsomely they will seem strengths, as if everyone else is inadequate if they do not have your inadequacies. William H. Gass