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Reading aloud
to my wife
a delightfully academic

description of
my eco-conscious intent
in a simple poem,

we laugh
like a tree full
of kookaburras.

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Have you had this too? The poem was a cut out from a journal entry about
hanging out my washing when I lived in a flat. It was sprinkling that day,
but I knew the little shower wouldn't last, so it was a good idea to grab
the communal clothesline when it was empty. Some other flat residents passed
me and looked quizzical. In the poem I noted they were going to an air
conditioned cinema in an air conditioned car, whereas I was enjoying light
rain and would no doubt trail lawn clippings into my laundry (a domestic
trivialised version of a great Greek poem about bringing the outdoors inside
and making love wildly in nature) ... The review made a lot out of my
intentions, giving the poem much more weight than it really deserved. I'm
not complaining - just laughing.

-- 

Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
'Mother Waits for Father Late' republished available at
http://www.picaropress.com/
http://www.qlrs.com/poem.asp?id=766
http://frankshome.org/AndrewBurke.html