A kind of summary of my obituary of R.F. Langley is printed in today's Guardian and accessible via Guardian Online, at http://www.guardian.co.uk/books/2011/mar/07/rf-langley-obituary
The reason it reads so badly is that 200 words were removed from what I understood to be the final agreed text. Whole paragraphs vanished. The photograph is not the one they were asked to use.
If anyone wants to see the original version I'll send it as an attachment.
PR
