Don't mow the snow, Joe! That's too slow. Jus' cut the grass, mas' -- Shout, "Tongs, ya bas!" Alas, that's sad and bad and flatter than a filleted pancake wrapped in a cantaloupe and hurled in the face of the infinite blizzards still blowing through the corridors of time, jimmie. R. -----Original Message----- From: Patrick McManus Sent: Saturday, December 04, 2010 1:09 PM To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Re: Snap Snow Garden Bird tracks -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Bob Grumman Sent: 04 December 2010 02:16 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Re: Snap on >> the snow >> >> >> in >> the garden >> >> >> bird tracks >> The above by itself is terrific. Amazing to me how much the "on" and "in" where they are do for it. Makes a nice haiku into a really superior one. --Bob