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Snow
Garden
Bird tracks
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Bob Grumman
Sent: 04 December 2010 02:16
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Subject: Re: Snap
on
>> the snow
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>> in
>> the garden
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>> bird tracks
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The above by itself is terrific. Amazing to me how much the "on" and
"in" where they are do for it. Makes a nice haiku into a really
superior one.
--Bob