Particularly admire the sound/visual unit "sheer sere", which I don't recall ever encountering previously. Assume it's intended to stand alone syntactically, though occasionally I want to connect it to the line which follows. Barry On Wed, 22 Sep 2010 15:48:40 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >leaves on the street to >pedal through yellow sheer sere >sun lower in sky > >22 IX 10 > >Douglas Barbour >[log in to unmask] > >http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ > >Latest books: >Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) >http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 >Wednesdays' >http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html > >There is much to be said in favor of modern journalism. By giving us >the opinions of the uneducated, it keeps us in touch with the >ignorance of the community. > > Oscar Wilde