Do you see that as more of a performance piece, Uche? I can hear it that way... Doug On 21-Jun-10, at 9:36 PM, Uche Ogbuji wrote: > And by me. "Demoiselle," by Uche Ogbuji: Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ Latest books: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 Wednesdays' http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html because I want to die writing Haiku or, better, long lines, clean and syllabic as knotted bamboo. Yes! Phyllis Webb