Now that can't have perfectly planned my (as audience) reading/
response. I like it, like the shifts, even the ones I'm not sure of,
Chris (would leave off the final end parenthesis too)
Doug
On 5-Apr-10, at 1:39 AM, Chris Jones wrote:
> Just posted onto my blog this verse like idea of the haptic pathos of
> distance ... comments most welcomed (see blog below)
>
>
>
> how to treat a horizon
> silver rich black and white film
>
> clutter just out of focus
> on an anticipated horizon line
> makes distance reached
> through a haptic stretch
>
> the clutter of human remnant images
> quantum neutron bomb leaves
> property safe without human
>
> close haptic vision felt with hand eyes
> draw in close distant horizon pathos
> on absolute distant pathos horizon
> a pathos of distant absolute on which
>
>
> [this could be said; affects densely neural
> fire, sad nostalgia still distress, a pill
> needed here to save leftover health
> and nostalgic good feeling
>
> [after event nostalgic fancy
> looks with a smile]
>
> all of this expected, Silvan
> Tomkins affects
>
>
> --
> I have chronic fatigue syndrome so I may be delayed in my reply.
> Just to
> let you know, that's all. Chris Jones.
>
> Blog: http://abdevpoetics.blogspot.com/
>
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