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I don't know nothing about birthin know babies miss prince; but, you got those lines passed me like a pro. SEE, you are already assisting you not wanting to way. On Sun, Apr 18, 2010 at 7:00 PM, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]>wrote: > Frankly, my dear, I don't......know. (Not a personal ref, Angel, but a > play > on Rhett Butler's response to that vixen Scarlett in Gone With The Wind.) > > Rename them, pulleeezzz! You can re-gender them, too. > > jp > > On 18 April 2010 21:53, Angel <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > > Heh.. > > > > Lol > > > > You are funny! I want more of that! And like you said a synthesis of man > > boy woman story! > > > > Why Jorge & frank!? > > > > Sent from my iPhone > > > > > > On Apr 18, 2010, at 6:44 PM, Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]> > > wrote: > > > > Group-writing, or, more aptly, the Chinese Whisper Game of > group-writing, > >> could be cool. But do you want us to flesh out your story, or just have > a > >> wild go at any subject we want? If you want us to flesh out your story, > >> I'd > >> have to decline bcuz I think you should do it all yourself. I'm not > much > >> on > >> workshopped plays for lotsa reasons. > >> > >> Having just read two sf novels with the kind of thrills you mention with > >> your story, I'd now rather sit down with a bodice-ripper or a simple and > >> elegant poem or two. > >> > >> Might be just that, as nearly always, some stories are "man" stories, > some > >> stories are "woman" stories------and there're really great stories that > >> are > >> both, or p'raps neither. > >> > >> Here's my contribution to your first scene: > >> > >> *George*: "Throw away that nasty guitar. We don't need music performed > >> by > >> a severed hand. That's SO yesterday." > >> > >> *Frank*: "It's my severed hand, and I'm keeping it for......other > uses > >> besides guitar-plucking. Right now it needs practice on such pieces as > >> *Clair > >> de Lune* and *Flight of the Bumblebees*." > >> > >> *George*: "Just keep the bleeping hand away from my Lab!" > >> > >> *Frank*: "But you said I could experiment in your lab!" > >> > >> *George*: "Idiot. I meant my Labrador." > >> > >> (Act One, scene one incomplete) > >> > >> --------------------- > >> > >> Have fun, > >> > >> joodled playwright > >> > >> On 18 April 2010 21:26, Angel Robert Marquez <[log in to unmask] > >> >wrote: > >> > >> > >>>> Thanks for Frank(enstein), Angel. > >>>> > >>>> Why don't you start writing your screenplay? > >>>> > >>> > >>> I did/have. > >>> > >>> > >>> Your client got to hear all > >>>> your play ideas, but insteada telling them to us, you ask us to > >>>> > >>> group-write > >>> > >>>> the thing. 'Supwidat? > >>>> > >>>> Well, he tricked me. Group-write would just be interesting for > >>> collaboration research and a good time to mess with the new wp install. > >>> > >>> The story's bout a guy who writes, records, and self distributes music > >>> and > >>> unknown to him the listeners wind up killing an authority figure. The > >>> hook > >>> is it's not him, the guitar is possessed and compels him to do it's > >>> bidding. > >>> Story winds down to cop has theory and his partner tries to kill him > when > >>> testing the theory...BUT girl gets to the guy and kills him and takes > the > >>> guitar. THEN the screen pans out to a future audience where the keynote > >>> is > >>> how they pulled all the memories from and inanimate object with this > new > >>> technology and of course someone on the audience has their eyes on the > >>> guitar and THE END. Theirs lots of room to play. I have pretty much > every > >>> character scene etc in place, I am just more interested in other > peoples > >>> takes than my own. All tied together nicely for a real thrill packed > >>> roller > >>> coaster ride through knowing, unknowing and BAM. I even have and > >>> endorsement > >>> model for all the listening devices that the killers would listen to > >>> before > >>> they switched to crazy. I could even put my crappy music playing in the > >>> back > >>> ground of all the death scenes seeing it's sketchy production would fit > >>> the > >>> mold. > >>> > >>> C'mon judy, I'll be your best friend! > >>> > >>> > >>>> Judy > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> On 17 April 2010 23:38, Angel Robert Marquez <[log in to unmask] > >>>> > >>>>> wrote: > >>>>> > >>>> > >>>> Okay poetry people. Let me throw this at you. > >>>>> > >>>>> Like I said in the beginning I like to write and it's fun to get it > out > >>>>> etc.. > >>>>> > >>>>> So, not to be the pretentious guy that lives in the LA area; but, > >>>>> > >>>> rather > >>> > >>>> the > >>>>> dude you all love to hate and would like to work on a 'project' as a > >>>>> collective with. I have a screenplay! > >>>>> > >>>>> lol > >>>>> BUT, really I do. It's been refined etc..lets say more of an outline > >>>>> > >>>> than > >>> > >>>> an > >>>>> actual finished product. Anyhow, I do freelance work in LA and a > recent > >>>>> client was a pretty cool dude. Although, the last time we met we > spent > >>>>> > >>>> the > >>>> > >>>>> first 3 hours (paid) with him pulling a screen play out of his > cabinet > >>>>> > >>>> and > >>>> > >>>>> reciting it to me as I fueled the fire as a listener and interested > >>>>> > >>>> party. > >>>> > >>>>> Because I was interested and his screenplay was not totally original > >>>>> > >>>> but > >>> > >>>> entertaining. Anyways, he also showed me this bad ass music videos his > >>>>> > >>>> son > >>>> > >>>>> produces in NYC and I was extremely impressed. Yes, so, like a fool > >>>>> revealed my master piece in like 5 minutes, not nearly as > entertaining, > >>>>> animated, or acted as him; but, a quick 1,2,3 punch. I kind of felt > >>>>> > >>>> like > >>> > >>>> I > >>>> > >>>>> made a bad move. I liked the dude a lot as a client and person he was > >>>>> > >>>> funny > >>>> > >>>>> and reeled me in like a pro. I hadn't told ANYONE about this > particular > >>>>> secret project, I was just letting it germinate. This guy said he had > >>>>> connections with the industry etc and he told me the new plans Disney > >>>>> > >>>> and > >>> > >>>> some other studios were making. > >>>>> > >>>>> Which brings me to this. The guy gave me this DVD about writing > >>>>> > >>>> screenplays > >>>> > >>>>> and I want to 'open source' my concept; but, not if people aren't > >>>>> interested. I like you guys and you all have a distinct writing style > >>>>> > >>>> and > >>> > >>>> think as a group something interesting might emerge from my throwing > >>>>> > >>>> this > >>> > >>>> out: > >>>>> http://www.play.angelrobertmarquez.com/ > >>>>> > >>>>> So, the link above could be used as a collaborative effort. I could > >>>>> > >>>> give > >>> > >>>> everyone or anyone access to the admin and they could even learn about > >>>>> wordpress at the same time. > >>>>> > >>>>> My vision would be someone owns each ACT, and then kind of lets > things > >>>>> happen. I haven't put my high concept up there yet though. I was > >>>>> > >>>> thinking > >>> > >>>> if somebody says I want to hear it I will throw it down if not I'll > >>>>> > >>>> keep > >>> > >>>> it > >>>> > >>>>> to myself. It might never go anywhere that way though. > >>>>> > >>>>> What do you think? > >>>>> > >>>>> Thoughts? > >>>>> > >>>>> I have more to add BUT, I don't want to overwhelm. I think > Frankenstein > >>>>> came > >>>>> from a group of writers playing with who could write the scariest > story > >>>>> etc.. > >>>>> > >>>>> I think the blog would be cool to use to see the progress and add > ideas > >>>>> easily along the way. I would compile the final and distribute indie > >>>>> > >>>> style. > >>>> > >>>>> we could change the domain along the way and use the blog as a > >>>>> > >>>> purchasing > >>> > >>>> channel/platform. > >>>>> > >>>>> Let me know what you think : ) > >>>>> > >>>>> > >>>> > >>> >