Thanks. Anticipating formatting difficulties, I almost refrained from attempting the mesostic. But after surprising myself by writing a diastic while walking for exercise, I sat down and quickly realized that the "spine" (vertically spelling the title) might be retained visually despite transmissions if I chose a position close to the left margin. The relationship between the two seven-line units could be serial rather than stanzas of a sonnet. Barry On Thu, 25 Feb 2010 16:34:37 +1100, Chris Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >The second stanza I really enjoyed. > >On Wed, 2010-02-24 at 23:59 +0000, Barry Alpert wrote: >> MONTAGE (DISTANCE) >> >> redirected by Artavazd Peleshian >> >> >> Magnetic field around the film. >> Dont call my method montage; >> sense I've eliminated montage. >> Montage--I've destroyed montage! >> Montage, no collision, so as a result >> montage has been destroyed in Eisenstein. >> Anymore only the whole film has the meaning . . . >> >> FilM >> invOlved >> meaNs >> anyThing >> creAtes >> fraGments, >> entErs the territory of the sound. >>