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Hmmnnn, probably that old lyric closure at work there, Andrew & Fred. Yep, I'll think on taking it out.... Thanks all Doug On 30-Sep-09, at 7:28 PM, andrew burke wrote: > Yes, Doug, I am there, hearing the voice wafting into the elevator. > I agree > with Fred: the last line is too tidy and closes off the active > image, still > constant and still craving. > > Andrew Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ Latest books: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 Wednesdays' http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html Take away my wisdom and my categories! Phyllis Webb