I detect no evidence you understand it, or "flarf" at all. To elicit the comment "bad poem" from a naif signals success in that range. Barry Alpert On Sun, 10 May 2009 01:28:26 +0300, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >if nothing else, it's a bad poem on its own. > > > >2009/5/6 Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]> > >> THOUGHTMESH >> >> >> Video shocked selfless publishing. >> Innovation featured fact editors edited. >> Ambition benefitted conceptual shocked video. >> >> >> Barry Alpert / Silver Spring, MD US / 5-6-09 (8:16 AM) >> >> Unconsciously referencing traditional forms with its 14 words, 3 lines, & >> the "rhyme" of its >> conclusion with its opening. Also an unexpected variant on my >> severely-edited workings >> with the strategies of "flarf". >>