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Here's atcha, Androo, Just starting a cogitate on your _Haibun for Sheila Murphy_, would enjoy hearing some other folks' opinions. I love it for startling-sweet-neat images co-piled, for sentiment of whole/sweet, for raking out cynicals, for singing/toe-tapping, and for saluting hearts-free. One alert: I react confused in the 2nd half of the poem, not knowing if you contrast cynicism with free-joy, or if you're underscoring the LIMITATION of words as opposed to ?? [music? soul-mind?]. When you clear that up, fairly easily----AWESOME poem! Judy 2009/1/9 andrew burke <[log in to unmask]> > I have a couple of poems up at http://pganickz.livejournal.com When you > have a mo, have a look. In a day or two, Peter (editor) is also going to > publish an experimental short story of mine, entitled Two Dead Matches. So, > feel free to return aon Monday >g< > > Cheers - > > > Andrew > http://hispirits.blogspot.com/ >