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Why don't you insert a noun of your choosing at the end of each line and then decide whether enjambement isn't indeed Doug's focus? Barry Alpert I can remember when the elimination of "articles" dominated my writing process, and that I cited "dichter=condensare" as a justification. On Sat, 13 Dec 2008 02:04:50 +0200, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >great colourdab of a poem! I dislike the enjambement a lot though. > >KS > >2008/12/11 Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> > >> moon in >> clouds above >> snow about >> a whiter shade of >> pales by >> >> >> Douglas Barbour >> [log in to unmask] >> >> http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ <http://www.ualberta.ca/%7Edbarbour/> >> >> Latest books: >> Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) >> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 >> Wednesdays' >> >> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground- press_10.html >> >> Why have you driven through my heart? >> Make that what. >> >> Artie Gold >>