Janet thanks !very observant -I read the poem lot's of times and could not find the typo had to show it to my partner (another Janet) and she saw it immediately)interesting how one can blank out Cheers Patrick -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Janet Jackson Sent: 28 November 2008 03:01 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Re: pat snap _-^*^-_Wednesday, November 26, 2008 nice typo in the third-last line J 2008/11/26 Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> > LOOKING > > he went > looking > for his snap > but it must > have flown away > but it did leave > a small golden > brown feather > which was stil1 > just wafting down > to the floor > > > pmcmanus > q353 > 'snap' being a > poetryetc snap poem > -- I'm looking for writing-related paid work! Performance (my poetry, yours or someone else's); any kind of writing including technical or corporate; ghostwriting; editing; teaching creative writing, poetry or performance; selling books; literary administration... whatever. All leads appreciated. Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]> www.proximitypoetry.com (Poetry) www.myspace.com/poetjj (Includes occasional arts & culture blog) The Line Mine, bulletin board for Perth poetry & spoken word: [log in to unmask] groups.yahoo.com/group/thelinemine Breastfeeding info & help: www.breastfeeding.asn.au