really amazing diction & tempo KS On 12/04/2008, Stephen Vincent <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Hands-up, dear stranger > This is a soft, torn trap > > Open holes > Loose dangled straps > > If you come from abroad > We know garlic > > We know strangers do crave > Familiar > > Shuttles, spun grain > Salt-less butter > > The brandied rain > Raspberry > > Tarts, subtle women: > The list could go on > > Stranger, open-hearted > Outlaws prey inward > > Capture love > In the wrong places > > Cavort too much, my daughter > Alone no long- > > er, I am alone > Whistling into darkness > > Hands-up, stranger, do > Not embrace my last daughter. > > Stephen Vincent > > http://stephenvincent.net/blog/ > >