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it seems to me a good poem just the way it is On Fri, Feb 29, 2008 at 8:52 PM, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > I wrote this today. Comments are welcome. > > > 5.2 > > trembling from rest > heart. thrum. feeling > body growing-knowing... > relations, organisation, > societies inconstant > flux; as it is with the earth > beneath waves > tectonic grind against > > man-made constructs > reduce to less than a heap of dust > > > -------------------------------------------------------------- > [log in to unmask] > .ukhttp://www.fatmandancing.co.ukhttp://www.myspace.com/fat_man_dancing -- Anny Ballardini http://annyballardini.blogspot.com/ http://www.fieralingue.it/modules.php?name=poetshome http://www.moriapoetry.com/ebooks.html I Tell You: One must still have chaos in one to give birth to a dancing star!