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Ha. The questions move away from mimesis into the mind perceiving/ constructing. I felt you could cut the third line (the 'mine' is implicit) to 'More like a cactus...'? Doug On 5-Mar-08, at 3:12 PM, Tina Bass wrote: > Frost > > I've got a tree, > but it's not a very good one. > > Mine is like a cactus... > > Where does it go after here? > Will it melt? > > Will it really go away? > > > [log in to unmask] > ://www.fatmandancing.co.ukhttp://www.myspace.com/fat_man_dancing > > > > Error message? > > Tone continues... > Time expires > Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ Latest book: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 Stars, rain, forests. Stars rain forests. John Newlove