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----- Original Message ----- 
From: "MC Ward" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Sunday, November 18, 2007 5:32 PM
Subject: Re: "Exquisite Hour"


> Magnificent, Fred! The different sections hang
> together beautifully under your (somewhat) mysterious
> title; and I particularly enjoyed the surprises of
> "regret" as a small Mafia clan and the discovery that
> the trillionaire in the last section is female. (Made
> me want to read the title as "Exquisite Hair,"
> though!)
>
> Candice
>
>


Glad you liked it.  Regret is more addictive than crack; if the Mob isn't 
behind it I'd be surprised.  --- Paul Verlaine, "L'Heure exquise."  There 
are things one can do in French one just can't in English.


La lune blanche
Luit dans les bois ;
De chaque branche
Part une voix
Sous la ramée...

Ô bien-aimée.

L'étang reflète,
Profond miroir,
La silhouette
Du saule noir
Où le vent pleure...

Rêvons, c'est l'heure.

Un vaste et tendre
Apaisement
Semble descendre
Du firmament
Que l'astre irise...

C'est l'heure exquise.


The white moon
Shines in the woods;
From every branch
A voice descends
From the leaves .

Oh my beloved.

The deep mirror
Of the pond reflects
The silhouette
Of the dark willow, whence
The wind cries .

Let us dream, it's time.

A vast and tender
Appeasement
Seems to descend
From the firmament
A star makes iridescent .

It is the exquisite hour.