is the link not showing up? or am I just impatient? I'd be very grateful if the round of advice I got, à la Bob urging me to look at the Line as a morphable device, could be briefly continued for this poem where I tried to take things of that nature into consideration.. don't mean to grub! KS On 11/10/2007, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > the dew was frost last night, first this year. > sorry for the link, I want the spacing to be intact. > please reply, critique; thanks guys. > > http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfr8jjpv_45gbb35f > > KS >