Joe, your comments on "overcoming" remind me of Nietzshe (sp?). Is he a major influence on you? Candice --- joe green <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > "This is excellently put. The solution, in > political poetry, is > Brechtian "alienation": objectivity, or what appears > to > be objectivity, where the reader expects pathos." > > > > Or pathos where the reader expects alienation and > the usual effects. > > The point is that a good poem is what remains after > encountering or > ignoring or transcending all systems that exist to > prevent its existence. > As Eliot said, the poem is judged by every other > poem out there. > It can be a unique instance only because it > encounters the uniqueness > of everything else. That also means it can, more or > less do exactly what > another good poem does and in the same way if it is > true that it can do > so because the other poems exist in the same mode > of overcoming – that > those instances have not been exhausted. At a > certain point a “sentimental” > poem can be a real poem – overcoming ironies and so > on – but only if all > that resists it is somehow overcome. > > > > The poetry of sincerity is exhausted just because > its opposite is never > really encountered. The poetry of alienation has > more going for it > since alienation implies something that is seen as > necessary to > overcome. And there are emotions that are not > banal – grief. > But how to overcome just the usual utterance? > Poetry that doesn’t want to encounter emotion and > instead > to claim that it exists in some abstract mode--such > as > LangPo does—and still wants to make a pretension to > significance > and meaning utterly baffles me. Why should I care > when I could > be reading King Lear? > > I love Ulysses and Finnegans Wake just because the > more > I read and discover the more I see to discover. > I’m delighted with a “difficult” text but only if > there is something there > – not banal utterance tricked up a la mode. > > I love scholarship and have spent many days > bellycrawling > through libraries to, for example, discover if > Shakespeare > could have known what was meant by a “Republic” in > the > sense it was understood just 100 years later etc > etc but nothing > is more pointless than the classification and > placing > of poets in schools. Wordsworth, for example, a > poet sincere. > Matt Arnold reading him for beauty and rest. > > > But you read his great poems and discover that > a central trope is nothingness, desolation, > impossibility of knowing, > vacancy etc coupled with the great insistence that > all of this can > be overcome. This insistence continually betrayed. > No closure. Not conscious irony but a real poet > encountering > the opposite of what he wants to mean and even doing > so never really > seeing that in his own poems. > > > > Look at the Ascent of the Alps..Book 6 of the > Prelude. > > Wordsworth anticipates ascending to the top. > Ah, that’s where the Sublime is!. > And …then: > > > "That from the torrent's further brink held forth > Conspicuous invitation to ascend > A lofty mountain. After brief delay > Crossing the unbridged stream, that road we took, > And clomb with eagerness, till anxious fears > Intruded, for we failed to overtake > Our comrades gone before. By fortunate chance, > While every moment added doubt to doubt, > A peasant met us, from whose mouth we learned > That to the spot which had perplexed us first > Wemust descend, and there should find the road, > Which in the stony channel of the stream > Lay a few steps, and then along its banks; > And, that our future course, all plain to sight, > Was downwards, with the current of that stream. > Loth to believe what we so grieved to hear, > For still we had hopes that pointed to the clouds, > We questioned him again, and yet again; > But every word that from the peasant's lips > Came in reply, translated by our feelings, > Ended in this,--'that we had crossed the Alps'. > > > Ha! So what do you do? He never noticed that he > was at the top—missed the Sublime. Admits this…. > > And then this attempt at recovery! > > > > Imagination--here the Power so called > Through sad incompetence of human speech, > That awful Power rose from the mind's abyss > Like an unfathered vapour that enwraps, > At once, some lonely traveller. I was lost; > Halted without an effort to break through; > But to my conscious soul I now can say-- > "I recognise thy glory:" in such strength > Of usurpation, when the light of sense … > > > Lost, lonely, abyss, usurpation all words that again > and again betray what he wants to assert. > > Then he descends and makes another recovery: > > > The melancholy slackening that ensued > Upon those tidings by the peasant given > Was soon dislodged. Downwards we hurried fast, > And, with the half-shaped road which we had missed, > Entered a narrow chasm. The brook and road > Were fellow-travellers in this gloomy strait, > And with them did we journey several hours > At a slow pace. The immeasurable height > Of woods decaying, never to be decayed, > The stationary blasts of waterfalls, > And in the narrow rent at every turn > Winds thwarting winds, bewildered and forlorn, > The torrents shooting from the clear blue sky, > The rocks that muttered close upon our ears, > Black drizzling crags that spake by the way-side > As if a voice were in them, the sick sight > And giddy prospect of the raving stream, > The unfettered clouds and region of the Heavens, > Tumult and peace, the darkness and the light-- > Were all like workings of one mind, the features > Of the same face, blossoms upon one tree; > Characters of the great Apocalypse, > The types and symbols of Eternity, > Of first, and last, and midst, and without end. > Whoa! He really needed that! And on and > on – revisions of the revisions…always wanting that > Eternity…language always undercutting it… but > something new emerges. > > The Right Stuff. > > > > > --------------------------------- > Take the Internet to Go: Yahoo!Go puts the Internet > in your pocket: mail, news, photos & more. > ____________________________________________________________________________________ Moody friends. Drama queens. Your life? Nope! - their life, your story. Play Sims Stories at Yahoo! Games. http://sims.yahoo.com/