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Andrew great one line verse at the end-P 'All citicisms welcome.' Ps shags off pylons has a ring!!although one might be electrocuted?? P concernd P -----Original Message----- From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of andrew burke Sent: 13 August 2007 05:03 To: [log in to unmask] Subject: Gibb R Daydream Yacht Club GIBB RIVER YACHT CLUB Blue sails in the backyard the fitted sheet billows like a spinnaker and the clothesline turns on its centreplate I daydream of an afternoon sailing on the Swan River and the cool of a yacht club bar Like shags off pylons two ibis fly off fence posts as a thirsty cow in the sun-dried paddock complains plaintively Black crows all tell her there's no barman here to serve a cold one this mob all gone to Derby Rodeo . as I shake my head and unpeg the washing my wife's black knickers start another line of thought All citicisms welcome. Andrew http://hispirits.blogspot.com/ http://www.inblogs.net/hispirits http://www.flickr.com/photos/aburke/ -- No virus found in this incoming message. Checked by AVG Free Edition. Version: 7.5.476 / Virus Database: 269.11.15/949 - Release Date: 12/08/2007 11:03